俗話(huà)說(shuō)，萬(wàn)事開(kāi)頭難，好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半。那么現(xiàn)在問(wèn)題來(lái)了，作文開(kāi)頭到底怎么寫(xiě)？

常見(jiàn)誤區(qū)

（為了說(shuō)明問(wèn)題，里面的舉例可能比較夸張，但是大家不要光顧著笑，也要反思下自己是不是或多或少也有這樣的問(wèn)題哦~）

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭一：中式英文

典型失敗案例：

Topic 1: The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily...

Topic 2: The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic 3: Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things...

Topic 4: The advantage of being a nice person

Being a niceperson have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get 'baoying'.

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭二：廢話(huà)連篇

典型失敗案例：

Topic 1: Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married...

修改方案：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山直奔主題

In my opinion,it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

Topic 2: Will modern technology, such as the Internet,ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

Ok, this topic isa very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

Topic 3: The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭三：觀(guān)點(diǎn)模糊

典型失敗案例：

Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topicis very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married,so this topic is very difficult for me...

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭四：偏離主題

典型失敗案例：

Topic: It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools,and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭五：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤

典型失敗案例：

Topic: If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right.Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭六：過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單

典型失敗案例：

Topic: The importance of environmental protection

This issue issurely very important, let’s talk about it!

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭七：用詞不當(dāng)

典型失敗案例：

Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭八：意思重復(fù)

典型失敗案例：

Topic: Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭九：觀(guān)點(diǎn)武斷

典型失敗案例：

Topic 1: The importance of confidence

In my opinion,confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful peoplein the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2: The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be not raffic problem any more.

◆需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭十：中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)（不是說(shuō)不可以用，而是因?yàn)楹芏嗫绝喪褂玫臅r(shí)候都會(huì)不自覺(jué)的用中式英語(yǔ) 讓考官不知所云）

典型失敗案例：

Topic 1: Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: 'Many sons,many lucks'...

正確說(shuō)法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2: Should we pretend to know everything or admitour ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: 'Know is know, don’t know is don’t know'...

Topic 3: Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole...

Topic 4: The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence: 'A good person is all life safe'. We Chinese people always say: 'Good has good pay, bad has bad pay'.

開(kāi)頭到底怎么寫(xiě)

（說(shuō)了這么多誤區(qū)，大家是不是有一種突然不知道怎么寫(xiě)開(kāi)頭的感覺(jué)？沒(méi)關(guān)系，趴趴來(lái)教你~）

要素一：現(xiàn)象句

　　雅思寫(xiě)作考題中會(huì)出現(xiàn)一個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，考生的任務(wù)就是在自己文章的第一句話(huà)將之改寫(xiě)，重述這個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

　　E.g.1

　　Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

　　It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

　　套句+同義詞替換：more and more= a large amount of

　　E.g.2

　　Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

　　What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

　　In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.

　　主被動(dòng)之間的轉(zhuǎn)換：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school.

　　同義詞的替換：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven.

　　E.g.3

　　In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

　　It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

　　主被動(dòng)之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，以及同義替換：finish high school = graduate from high school.

　　所以，從上文中可以看出，一般來(lái)說(shuō)，現(xiàn)象句會(huì)在最開(kāi)始加上一個(gè)套句，并且加上地點(diǎn)和時(shí)間。

　　雅思大作文開(kāi)頭段經(jīng)典套句：

　　1.It is true that......是真實(shí)的

　　2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…

　　3.It is quite common… …是常見(jiàn)的

　　4.There is no doubt that… …是毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)的

　　5.There is no denying that… …是毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)的

　　6.It is undeniable that… …是毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)的

　　地點(diǎn)：in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place

　　時(shí)間：in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays

要素二：點(diǎn)到問(wèn)題

　　雅思大作文考題分成兩種：report & argumentative.

　　對(duì)于report(題目一般會(huì)涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)

　　E.g.4

　　In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.

　　What do you think are the cause of this?

　　What solutions can you suggest?

　　Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

　　點(diǎn)到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的帶領(lǐng)出來(lái)，全文的第二段再開(kāi)始慢慢細(xì)致的描述。

　　E.g.5

　　Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

　　Why is it difficult to define?

　　What factors are important in achieving happiness?

　　Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people.While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.

　　點(diǎn)到了why difficult--通過(guò)引用兩組不同人的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，把造成這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的原因大致導(dǎo)出，與上一個(gè)例子有異曲同工之妙。

　　對(duì)于argumentative(do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion.; is it a positive or negative development?)，這種題型基本上都問(wèn)了作者的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，所以在開(kāi)頭段落的描寫(xiě)過(guò)程中沒(méi)什么特別大的區(qū)別。

　　E.g.6

　　Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.

　　Do you agree or disagree?

　　I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day.

　　改寫(xiě)題目+主動(dòng)變被動(dòng)：have more negative than positive effects on = can be negatively affected by.

　　直接表達(dá)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)：I tend to agree that

　　E.g.7

　　Some people feel that entertainers (e.g.film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.

　　Do you agree or disagree?

　　Which other types of job should be highly paid?

　　I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid.This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do.

　　現(xiàn)象+觀(guān)點(diǎn)

　　E.g.8

　　Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　What other measures do you think might be effective?

　　There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere.Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.